tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post1722371447417050718..comments2023-08-28T06:19:55.935-07:00Comments on R.S. Bohn: 3ww: The CurtainR.S. Bohnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09101260459422806220noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post-59932602789062936812010-11-28T22:03:58.720-08:002010-11-28T22:03:58.720-08:00Very touching. I liked it. The culture/setting i...Very touching. I liked it. The culture/setting itself seems to be a character in this writing, and I'm always drawn to an appropriately written setting as character.<br /><br />The emotional content here is more important than anything else, and I think you nailed your objective.<br /><br />Well done.<br /><br />.........dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post-70287113042517685282010-11-26T19:11:22.500-08:002010-11-26T19:11:22.500-08:00I don't know about maudlin but you did a fine ...I don't know about maudlin but you did a fine job with the atmosphere. It drips with it!Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post-65758513121173220012010-11-25T12:27:27.093-08:002010-11-25T12:27:27.093-08:00shoes shining like puddles in the street after a f...<i>shoes shining like puddles in the street after a four a.m. rain</i><br /><br />*adores*<br /><br />Nicely macabre and the dowdy Victorian atmosphere is just the right shade of ominous.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post-85592709419407433642010-11-25T08:47:55.382-08:002010-11-25T08:47:55.382-08:00An intersting tale.. brings out naked emotions and...An intersting tale.. brings out naked emotions and instincts too.. like it..Ramesh Soodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post-77397091682296493562010-11-25T06:17:29.559-08:002010-11-25T06:17:29.559-08:00Maudlin and overly dramatic suits you! I think so...Maudlin and overly dramatic suits you! I think some of your best stuff is probably the writing you would apply those terms to. Sort of a hyper-realism, or, what reality would be if it were more interesting....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post-75913519549524532322010-11-24T17:24:09.782-08:002010-11-24T17:24:09.782-08:00Wow, well done.Wow, well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post-57349125946594174192010-11-24T12:31:33.436-08:002010-11-24T12:31:33.436-08:00Yes maudlin I think is the right term, very well c...Yes maudlin I think is the right term, very well constructed and carried through.Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post-30893419312643702262010-11-24T11:10:23.358-08:002010-11-24T11:10:23.358-08:00Dramatic, yes, but not overly so. I like how you d...Dramatic, yes, but not overly so. I like how you depicted the performer; someone trying in vain to fill a hole within himself with the admiration of a neverending audience, when in the end he only craves his father´s approval. <br /><br />I´m glad you wanted to do 3WW this week =)asuqihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05478950013985706858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post-64889489390547522652010-11-24T07:32:06.567-08:002010-11-24T07:32:06.567-08:00I thought this was touching not maudlin - brought ...I thought this was touching not maudlin - brought to mind Victorain England and Victorian relationships..I could imagine the feel of the red velvet curtain protecting him from the real world..I am glad he stepped outside..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.com