tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post8180504868344108521..comments2023-08-28T06:19:55.935-07:00Comments on R.S. Bohn: Flashfic: A Fair TradeR.S. Bohnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09101260459422806220noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post-23781614589740336012012-05-09T08:10:38.260-07:002012-05-09T08:10:38.260-07:00Superb storytelling. Just perfect.Superb storytelling. Just perfect.duniazadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15139707545316115756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post-55015706100729178622012-05-04T12:09:06.335-07:002012-05-04T12:09:06.335-07:00It´s been too long since I´ve read something of yo...It´s been too long since I´ve read something of yours =)<br /><br />Very smoothly done, I didn´t even notice the prompt words =) I love that the aliens want whiskey, it somehow seems likely! And Lyle is a great character.<br /><br />You did 3WW =)asuqihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05478950013985706858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post-47541829464620567542012-05-03T17:23:46.558-07:002012-05-03T17:23:46.558-07:00I like how, even 700 words, you inject shades of g...I like how, even 700 words, you inject shades of grey into a straight up sci-fi tale. So much fun here.Chris Alliniottehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04094925215735680849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post-1643132755523169482012-05-03T07:34:44.666-07:002012-05-03T07:34:44.666-07:00Thank you, everyone, for your comments.
Sean, ev...Thank you, everyone, for your comments. <br /><br />Sean, everything's just swell :) Hope you're doing well, too!R.S. Bohnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09101260459422806220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post-51346861862215653352012-05-02T21:00:40.200-07:002012-05-02T21:00:40.200-07:00Very nicely done. I really like the way you build ...Very nicely done. I really like the way you build Lyle's character and the use of the prompt words.Rae Trigghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10727737549878623376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post-66367171390876127792012-05-02T12:57:19.769-07:002012-05-02T12:57:19.769-07:00So much to like about this. Excellent use of the p...So much to like about this. Excellent use of the prompt words. Especially liked the Comet and America reference. Great job! Hope all is well with you :)Sean Patrick Reardonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14051252366031997054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post-33659008045807529932012-05-02T10:34:08.892-07:002012-05-02T10:34:08.892-07:00Every word meaningfully placed in this story..like...Every word meaningfully placed in this story..like rain drops on the window of the comet..which will hopefully take Lyle beyond the city limits..physically that is!..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3588286618702079946.post-19077956314467565532012-05-02T09:52:52.037-07:002012-05-02T09:52:52.037-07:00ooh I love this story.I love that he is going to s...ooh I love this story.I love that he is going to stop the aliens once and for all.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.com